Yeah, I should come back to update this soon. I've got a couple of drawings I want to do before this, but once I get them out of the way and finish the art assets, I'll be able to focus on the story.
Overall, I enjoyed what I have read so far. I really like Zach (although I'm biased cuz sharks are my favorite!) , especially when you consider the rarity of shark characters in VNs. Aside from a few grammatical errors and some minor syntax issues, The writing is very well done. I enjoy the premise of the novel, and I could easily see some interesting story elements :). It is my belief that this VN has a lot of potential. Keep up the good work!
If you'd like, I can provide a more in-depth review/ constructive criticism
Sorry for the late reply, thanks for the feedback! Yeah, There aren't many shark bois in the furry VN community, so I basically decided the dateable characters would be underappreciated species. And I would appreciate more details about how I could do better, thank you for the offer!
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This vn is So Cool!! especialy Zach he his so cute. But will there be any update ?
Yeah, I should come back to update this soon. I've got a couple of drawings I want to do before this, but once I get them out of the way and finish the art assets, I'll be able to focus on the story.
Overall, I enjoyed what I have read so far. I really like Zach (although I'm biased cuz sharks are my favorite!) , especially when you consider the rarity of shark characters in VNs. Aside from a few grammatical errors and some minor syntax issues, The writing is very well done. I enjoy the premise of the novel, and I could easily see some interesting story elements :). It is my belief that this VN has a lot of potential. Keep up the good work!
If you'd like, I can provide a more in-depth review/ constructive criticism
Sorry for the late reply, thanks for the feedback! Yeah, There aren't many shark bois in the furry VN community, so I basically decided the dateable characters would be underappreciated species. And I would appreciate more details about how I could do better, thank you for the offer!
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