Yep, everythings going fine. Just been trying to get general life stuff into schedule, and I'm thinking of just starting from scratch since I'm confident I can make a better start to this now.
Yeah, I should come back to update this soon. I've got a couple of drawings I want to do before this, but once I get them out of the way and finish the art assets, I'll be able to focus on the story.
Overall, I enjoyed what I have read so far. I really like Zach (although I'm biased cuz sharks are my favorite!) , especially when you consider the rarity of shark characters in VNs. Aside from a few grammatical errors and some minor syntax issues, The writing is very well done. I enjoy the premise of the novel, and I could easily see some interesting story elements :). It is my belief that this VN has a lot of potential. Keep up the good work!
If you'd like, I can provide a more in-depth review/ constructive criticism
Sorry for the late reply, thanks for the feedback! Yeah, There aren't many shark bois in the furry VN community, so I basically decided the dateable characters would be underappreciated species. And I would appreciate more details about how I could do better, thank you for the offer!
← Return to game
Comments
Log in with itch.io to leave a comment.
Hope everything alright
Yep, everythings going fine. Just been trying to get general life stuff into schedule, and I'm thinking of just starting from scratch since I'm confident I can make a better start to this now.
Ha ok because i was scared that this VN was like dead or on Hiatus despite the last message from you
This vn is So Cool!! especialy Zach he his so cute. But will there be any update ?
Yeah, I should come back to update this soon. I've got a couple of drawings I want to do before this, but once I get them out of the way and finish the art assets, I'll be able to focus on the story.
Overall, I enjoyed what I have read so far. I really like Zach (although I'm biased cuz sharks are my favorite!) , especially when you consider the rarity of shark characters in VNs. Aside from a few grammatical errors and some minor syntax issues, The writing is very well done. I enjoy the premise of the novel, and I could easily see some interesting story elements :). It is my belief that this VN has a lot of potential. Keep up the good work!
If you'd like, I can provide a more in-depth review/ constructive criticism
Sorry for the late reply, thanks for the feedback! Yeah, There aren't many shark bois in the furry VN community, so I basically decided the dateable characters would be underappreciated species. And I would appreciate more details about how I could do better, thank you for the offer!
Show post...
AMAZING VN GAME